2018年英语一小作文范文分析 第1篇

Dear Sir/Madam,

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(1) I write intending to beg your pardon about ( 某 事 ).

(2) Although what is done is done, I must explain my reasons for this apology.

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(3) To begin with, ( 第 ⼀ 个 原 因 ). I have since been racking my brains to try and rectify this situation.

(4) What is more, （第⼆个原因）. This was unquestionably adding insult to injury, making me feel down and sad.

(5) Having thought about it, I recommend that (具体解决⽅案), as this should rectify things.

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(6) I would like to advance my thanks to you for considering my letter.

(7) I welcome any feedback from you at any time.

Yours sincerely，

Zhang San

中文翻译

Dear Sir/Madam,

段落⼀

(1) 我写信的⽬的是请求你原谅（某事）。

(2) 虽然事已⾄此，但我必须解释我为何道歉。

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(3) ⾸先，（第⼀个原因），我⼀直在绞尽脑汁试图扭转这种局⾯。

(4) 此外，（第⼆个原因）。这⽆疑是雪上加霜， 让我感到沮丧难过。

(5) 经过思考，我建议（具体解决⽅案），因为这应该能够改善现状。

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(6) ⾮常感谢您对我的来信给予关注。 (7) 欢迎您在任何时候向我反馈意⻅。

Yours sincerely，

Zhang San

2018年英语一小作文范文分析 第2篇

Dear Sir/Madam,

段落⼀

(1) I am a student majoring in history at Beijing University.

(2) I would like to know whether it is convenient for you to（做某事）.

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(3) I am willing to provide you with the fundamental information about this event/meeting.

(4) To begin with, the event/meeting will kick off at 9 am sharp, on Monday, at the auditorium.

(5) In addition, please fill in and submit the personal details, attached to this email, in advance.

(6) Finally, there will be a Question & Answer session for around forty minutes in the end.

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(7) I am grateful that you have made time to read my letter.

(8) Your attendance will, without doubt, elevate this event /meeting, in our opinion.

Yours sincerely，

Zhang San

中文翻译

Dear Sir/Madam,

段落⼀

(1) 我是⼀名北京⼤学历史学专业的学⽣。

(2) 我想知道，您是否⽅便（做某事）。

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(3) 我很乐意告诉您关于此次活动/会议的基本信息。

(4) ⾸先，本次活动/会议将于周⼀上午九点整在礼堂举⾏。

(5)另外，请提前填写并提交附件中的个⼈信息表。

(6) 最后，结束时将会安排 40 分钟左右的问答环节。

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(7) 谢谢您抽出时间来阅读我的信。

(8) 在我们看来，您的到来⽆疑会让本次活动/会议更上⼀层楼。

Yours sincerely，

Zhang San

2018年英语一小作文范文分析 第3篇

Dear Sir/Madam,

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(1) I am a student majoring in education at Sichuan University.

(2) It gives me no pleasure in having to register my dissatisfaction with (主题词 ).

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(3) Primarily, (投诉的第⼀个原因). I have been very anxious about this, and I resent the time it has taken up.

(4) In the second place, I have been calling your service hotline but have never had a response.

(5) I am eager to find a solution and urgently need your help.

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(6) Thanks a lot for the fact that you have not neglected this letter.

(7) I genuinely long for the opportunity to have a talk with you on this.

Yours sincerely，

Zhang San

中文翻译

Dear Sir/Madam,

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(1) 我是四川大学教育专业的学⽣。

(2) 我也不想投诉（主题词），但我不得不这么做。

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(3) ⾸先，（投诉的第⼀个原因）。我为此感到⾮常焦虑，⾮常讨厌这件事占据我的时间。

(4) 其次，我拨打了服务热线，但从没得到过回应。

(5) 我迫切想要找到解决办法，也迫切需要你的帮助。

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(6) ⾮常感谢您没有忽略掉这封信。 (7) 我期待能与您关于这个事情好好谈⼀谈。

Yours sincerely，

Zhang San

2018年英语一小作文范文分析 第4篇

Part A

51.

Directions:

Suppose you are working for the “Aiding Rural Primary School” project of your university. Write an email to answer the inquiry from an international student volunteer, specifying the details of the project.

You should write neatly on the ANWSER SHEET.

Do not sign you own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead.

Do not write the address. (10 points)

解析：

从形式来讲，今年的英语一小作文又考察了书信的形式，还是在意料之中的。从历年来的考查形式来看：无论是英语一还是英语二，小作文考查书信类和告示类两种。其中，从近年的考频来说，书信是考查的重点。在英语一中，小作文考查了15年，其中，13年都考查到了书信。

但从内容来说今年的英语一的小作文有点难度。考查了回复询问信，偏近于介绍性的信，需要介绍“援助乡村小学”的志愿者活动的具体内容。英语一之前的小作文从没有考过此类话题。在书信中，建议信和推荐信出现得最多。而无论是回复信还是介绍性的信都只分别在英语二中考过，这也是近几年当中首次出现的一个全新的话题。

写作时，按照一般顺序。第一段写非常开心收到你的询问信这样过渡性内容，再加上写作目的;第二段改写题目提纲，具体介绍这个项目的具体内容;第三段再次点题和写期待。本文的要点有三个：一个是作为回复信，一段中过渡性内容应切题，不能生搬硬套模板;再就是是介绍的内容也要切题，符合这类活动的常规安排。第三段可以表示欢迎和期待。

另外，注意小作文的评分侧重点。考研大纲指出：A 节作文的评分侧重点在于信息点的覆盖、内容的组织、语言的准确性、格式和语域的恰当。对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据具体试题作调整。允许在作文中使用提示语中出现过的个别关键词或词组，但使用提示语中出现过的句子将被扣分。这一点一定要引起重视!

范文：

Dear friends,

As a coordinator of “Aiding Rural Primary School” project organized by Peking university, I am much delighted to have heard from you asking the possibility of being a volunteer for the project and I am writing to make a brief introduction regarding ...

2018年英语一小作文范文分析 第5篇

Dear Sir/Madam,

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(1) I am a civil engineering student at Suzhou University of Science and Technology.

(2) I’m willingly writing to you to make a detailed recommendation/ introduction of（主题词）.

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(3) About my recommendation /introduction, there are two particular reasons for it.

(4) To start with, ( 第 ⼀ 个 推荐/介绍的内容); surely this being the case, one can understand why it is on everyone’s lips.

(5) Moreover, (第⼆个 推 荐 / 介 绍 的 内 容 ). This, above most of the other aspects, seems to be the reason for its popularity.

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(6) Thank you for reading my letter; I know you have a busy schedule.

(7) Should you require further information, I can provide you with a detailed account.

Yours sincerely

Zhang San

中文翻译

Dear Sir/Madam,

段落⼀

(1) 我是苏州科技大学的土木工程专业的学生。

(2) 我很乐意写信向您详细推荐/介绍（主题词）。

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(3) 我的推荐/介绍主要出于两个特别的原因。

(4) ⾸先，（第⼀个推荐/介绍的内容）；在这个基础上，你就可以理解为什么⼤家都在谈论它。

(5) 此外，（第⼆个推荐/介绍的内容）。这⼀点⽐其他⽅⾯都重要，似乎是它受欢迎的原因。

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(6) 感谢您能阅读我的信；知道您平时很忙。

(7) 如果您想了解更多，我可以为您提供详细描述。

Yours sincerely

Zhang San

2018年英语一小作文范文分析 第6篇

Dear Sir/Madam,

段落⼀

(1) The reason I pen this note is to thank you for helping me.(2) Were it not for your help, I might not have gotten through the conundrums.

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(3) At the outset, （第⼀件 事 ）; and I cannot begin to imagine how much time this took you.

(4)Furthermore, I cannot forget how you changed your holiday plans just to lend me a hand.

(5) Knowing you would never ask for anything from me, I still hope you accept my thank-you

gift: （具体的⽅案）.

段落三

(6) I am truly grateful that you are making time for my letter.

(7) If I can assist you, please send me a message.

Yours sincerely，

Zhang San

中文翻译

Dear Sir/Madam,

段落⼀

(1) 我写这封信是想向您给予我的帮助表示感谢。

(2) 要是没有您的帮助，我也许没办法度过难关。

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(3) ⾸先，（第⼀件事）；很难想象您在这件事上花费了多少时间。

(4) 此外，您还改变了假期计划，只为给我帮助， 我难以忘记。

(5) 我知道您肯定不会向我索取任何东⻄，但我还是希望您能接受我的答谢礼物：（具体的⽅案）。

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(6) ⾮常感谢您抽出时间来读我的信。 (7) 如果我能帮助到您，请给我发消息。

Yours sincerely，

Zhang San

2018年英语一小作文范文分析 第7篇

Dear Sir/Madam,

段落⼀

(1) I am an undergraduate majoring in mathematics at Nankai University.

(2) I am hoping to have your help in gathering some important details about（主题词）.

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(3) As described in the next paragraphs, there are some specific contents of interest.

(4) In the first place， (第⼀个信息). Aware of its significance, I have prioritized it among all the must-have things.

(5) In addition, (第⼆个信息). Without question, this extra fact will greatly reduce my anxiety when making my decision.

段落三

(6) Knowing that you are reading my letter makes me feel very grateful.

(7) It would be most helpful if you can give me details in writing.

Yours sincerely，

Zhang San

中文翻译

Dear Sir/Madam,

段落⼀

(1) 我是南开⼤学数学专业的学⽣。

(2) 我希望能得到你的帮助，获得⼀些与（主题词）有关的重要细节。

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(3) 下⾯⼏段所阐述的便是我感兴趣的⼀些具体内容。

(4) 第⼀，（第⼀个信息）。因为意识到它的重要性，我把它列为所有必须了解的内容中的优先事项。

(5) 此外，（第⼆个信息）。了解这个问题将⼤⼤减少我做决定时的焦虑。

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(6) 知您正在阅读我的来信，我⾮常感激。 (7) 如果你能以书⾯形式告诉我这些信息，那真是帮了我⼤忙。

Yours sincerely，

Zhang San