商务英语邮件广告范文 第一篇

如果你接触过的商务邮件够多的话，你会发现：商务英语邮件中的语言和大家平时说的、听的地道的口语表达没有太大差别。商务英语邮件在“腔调”上虽然有“正式”和“非正式”的区别，但是它们都必须是“自然的(natural)” ：

商务英语邮件中的语言虽然是written English， 但它们在“腔调”上应该和spoken English相似。

很多学生在刚刚开始学习商务英语邮件写作的时候，经常会因为过度追求“专业化”和“职业化”而使写出来的句子特别拗口、晦涩。比如下面这个例子：

As per your request, please find enclosed herewith acheck in the amount of $ .

这个句子中使用了如“as per”和“herewith”这样的看起来很专业但是却没有太多实际意义的词。这些词的使用导致整个句子理解起来很费劲。其实这个学生犯了我们很多学生都会犯的错误：试图通过使用一些big words来提升自己的专业度。但是这样的做法往往适得其反。我们来看下这个句子可以怎么改使其看起来更natural 一些：

As you requested, I’m enclosing a check for $ .

怎么样，修改后的句子是不是看起来更清爽，更容易理解呢?的确，这句话的“腔调”要更加natural一些。首先，这个句子中也因为用到了“you”“I”这样的词而使它更有亲和力，而不是那么冷冰冰。其次，从专业的角度来看，修改后的句子简明扼要，既节约了写信人的写作时间，又节约了收信人的阅读时间，这种“减法”恰恰体现了高效的商务沟通对专业度的要求。

大家再来看两封邮件，这两封邮件都是在阐述同一个问题。相信大家读完这两封邮件后，会对邮件的“腔调”有一个更加直观的认识。

——例1——

Dear :

With reference to your order for a Nashito Camcorder, we are in receipt of your check and are returning same.

I beg to inform you that, as a manufacturer, our company sells camcorders to dealers only. In compliance with our wholesale agreement, we deem it best to refrain from direct business with private consumers.

For your information, there are many retailers in your vicinity who carry Nashito Camcorders. Attached please find a list of said dealers.

Hoping you understand.

Yours truly,

Ava

——例2——

Dear :

We have received your order for a Nashito Camcorder but, unfortunately, must return your check.

As a manufacturer, we sell only to dealers, with whom we have very clear wholesale agreements.

Nevertheless, we sincerely appreciate your interest in Nashito products. We are therefore enclosing a list of retailers in your community who carry a full line of our camcorders. Any one of them will be happy to serve you.

Sincerely yours,

Ava

怎么样，乍一看，很难看出两封邮件写的是一件事情吧?例2的第一段就把主旨意思点明了：我们已经收到了你的订单，但是很遗憾，我们不得不退还你的支票。而例1绕来绕去绕到最后才知道原来是要拒绝订单。

综上所述，商务英语邮件的“腔调”其实没有那么复杂，表达自然、言简意赅就可以写出一个漂亮的邮件。

商务英语邮件广告范文 第二篇

Dear Mr. Jones:

We understand from your information posted on that you are in the market for textiles. We would like to take this opportunity to introduce our company and products, with the hope that we may work with Bright Ideas Imports in the future.

We are a joint venture specializing in the manufacture and export of textiles. We have enclosed our catalog, which introduces our company in detail and covers the main products we supply at present. You may also visit our online company introduction at which includes our latest product line.

Should any of these items be of interest to you, please let us know. We will be happy to give you a quotation upon receipt of your detailed requirements.

We look forward to receiving your enquires soon.

Sincerely,

John Roberts

商务英语邮件广告范文 第三篇

定购与确认OrdersandAcknowledgment

20xx-08-26

Glory THE GLORY GLASS CO. LTD.

108 Laoshan Road Qingdao Shangdong China

Tel： (0532) 500 000 Fax： (0532) 500 001 Zip： 266000

September 30, 200#

Hamzza A. Sesay

Managing Director

The Sesays' International Co. Ltd.

101 Long Street

Capetown

South Africa

Dear Mr. Sesay：

We thand you for your fax of September 27, together with your orders and . has been added to your Christmas order and is being made ready for immediate dispatch. We regret that we are still unable to supply xxxLuxuryxxx champagne glasses, but we are sending you xxxBlissxxx, the alternative marked on your order.

We were very gratified to learn of the success you are having with our glassware , and we shall be pleased to discuss your reques for more favourable terms. When our representative, Mr. Zhao, calls on you in the new year, he will make you an offer which we feel sure will meet with your approval.

we send you our warmest congratulations on your increased business with us and look forward to further increases to our mutual benefit.

Yours faithfully

Rui Xuezhen

Sales Manager

商务英语邮件广告范文 第四篇

Dear Mr. Jones:

We have refreshed our online catalog at , and now it covers the latest new products, which are now available from stock.

We believe that you will find some attractive additions to our product line. Once you have had time to study the supplement, please let us know if you would like to take the matter further. We would be very happy to send samples to you for close inspection.

We will keep you informed on our progress and look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

商务英语邮件广告范文 第五篇

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If you don’t try you will never know our quality level 。you will increase your petitor‘s absolute advantage， they have our good quality and better prices， how can you pete with them

We really want to establish long-lasting business relationship with you， so we give you these best prices 。you can pare with other suppliers now 。you can ask your people to test the quality。Don’t miss this great opportunity 。if you want to try， please tell me ASAP， because the prices will be higher USDb to 1b after September bbb I think your current vendors are small factories ，right so they have lower prices with lower quality 。I think they have not stable and fixed quality 。if they have better orders they will not do your orders 。I am looking forward to hearing from your reply。 bbb please make your decision ASAP。 If you want to strengthen your petitive power， please don’t hesitate to ask me send the sales contract to you。

商务英语邮件广告范文 第六篇

运输Transportation

INDIGO CMPANY LIMITED

85 Victory Street, Manila

The Philippiness

Tel： 63-2-68000 Fax： 63-2-580001

13 June 200#

Mr. Li Mingyang

Export Manager

Unitech M & T Co. Ltd

963 Tianmu Road, 14th Floor

Shanghai 20xx70

China

Dear Mr. Li：

Our order ： 50 Electric Drills

As it is now more than two months since we opened a letter of credit in your favor, We should like to know exactly when you could arrange shipment of the goods. Your prompt response will be highly appreciated.

Sincerely.

Marco Fillmore

Managing Director